I'm an arm you are an arm
what's the reason you wish to do me harm
I can't wave to my friends anymore.
,
with you detecting my every single move
i feel like a caged bird
and my voice won't travel long enough to be heard.
.
where am I then?
.
after all everyone is confused
who is who or who does that,
the audience refuses to admit the power of a baseball bat.
,
can you understand me/
.
i still see you grow
even if we live at a chicken's coop,
I will let the rooster crow
.
so that we can
switch the gears
to have a better point of view.
Poetry Pantry #240
I'm not sure I understand...but I enjoyed your poem. Especially the last two stanzas. I think we would all like a better point of view....
ReplyDeletefun imagery!
ReplyDeletefun to read. :)
ReplyDeleteSwitching gears and stepping back for a different view are wonderful things to do
ReplyDeleteAh, really here is a feeling of 'caged bird'....to switch gears - a good idea! new point of view :)x ~ Like your witty way with words.
ReplyDeleteCan feel the tyranny of entrapment, but lightened by your word play.
ReplyDeletePoppy
love it, simply!!!!!
ReplyDeletehopeful ending.
ReplyDeletepositive ending.
ReplyDeleteexcellent plot.
ReplyDeleteway to go.
ReplyDeleteway to go.
ReplyDeleteconditions do make senses.
ReplyDeletesmart.
ReplyDeletecarefully written piece.
ReplyDeletelove the imagery.
perfectly brilliant.
ReplyDeletethere are always room for growth.
ReplyDeletenice.
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeletepowerful sentiments.
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