Sunday, December 21, 2014

christmas observations

groups of wild geese
searching for places to stay
heart breaking lessons

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tall, heavy, and fast,
the white truck roars by, leaving
the colorful lights dead



Christmas Poetic Forms : HAIKU (Week 7)

15 comments:

  1. very pure sentiments.

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  2. vivid portrayal of your subject, well done.

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  3. remarkable imagery.

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  4. There is power in your words. Happy New Year. Have a great 2015 :-)

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