Thursday, October 11, 2012

Eventide (For Short Story Slam Week 29 and Poets Rally Week 75)




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Thursday Short Story Slam Week 29: Dramas and Freedom

  
Under the trees
in the morning fog,
the sunshine leaks
through Jade green oaks,
Summer heat waning.
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Cold air warms up
as more cars desert its drive way
with piercing headlights,
School doors open wide welcoming students,
bells ringing.
#
Daycare centers have rooms
filled with toddlers, or preschoolers,
the PBS children's program is on,
music aloud,
Kids and teachers talking.
#
City park playground,
Mothers pace around the concrete
path, babies in strollers,
have fun see wild ducks
swimming.


I'm grateful for this award,
Happy Rally.
for Week 75, I nominate Gigi Ann
 
Again, appreciate your encouragements!

13 comments:

  1. busy and new morning here,

    well written entry.

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  2. love the gracefulness and playfulness.

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  3. Awww....Thank you for the nomination. That was sweet.

    Love your poem today, I feel myself in the park watching those mothers pushing their strollers.

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  4. nice poem malia. you're a keen observer. here's my rally.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2012/10/15/waters-of-spring/

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